2023年初中英語滿分作文六

第六篇：

【寫作要求】

假設不久前你們學校為貧困地區的孩子們籌款舉辦了一次慈善行活動。請據此在制定的位置上，以“Walk for children in poor areas”為題，為某中學生英文報寫一篇報道，內容要點如下：

1. 目的：為貧困地區的孩子們籌款

2. 10月23日，星期六

3. 路徑：學校—市中心

4. 簡況：學生把自己分成四人一組，出發前計劃好了一切，步行很艱辛，但活動過程中大家互相幫助，互相支持。最終在許多人的幫助下，籌得善款5萬多元。

5. 感受：每個人都很累，但都很高興，因為…

注意：1. 報道須包括所給內容要點，要求語句通順，意思連貫;

2. 第5要點的內容須用至少2句話展開合理想象，作適當發揮;

3. 詞數80個左右。

【優秀滿分范文】

Walk for children in poor areas

Not long ago, our school organized a charity walk to raise money for children in poor areas.

It was on Saturday, 23 rd October. We walked from the school to the center of the city. Before the walk, we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well. It was hard (tough) work. But during the walk, we supported and helped each other. With the help of many people, we raised over (more than) 50,000 yuan in the end.

We all felt tired, but we were very happy. Because it was a meaningful experience and it was an excellent chance to learn team spirit.

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